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Convictions and Persuasions
Poet: Dr. Alireza Bemanian
|Odyssey Collection — Volume 3
|Chapter I: The Imminence
|January 2, 2026
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رشکِ شیدِ هور مفروشِ نگه هامون سَجن کاشانه نیست
Chapter I: The Imminence — epigraph
Convictions and persuasions, inducements and enticements,
the path and track, the route and trail,
pertain and relate, assume and concern.
You, the breathing ether,
the gasping melody of intimacy and imminence,
and the inhaling breeze of enlightenments, clarifications, and elucidations,
the salute and signal, the gesture and motion.
You, the delight of the crisscrosses, elation of the traverses,
and ecstasy of the sole moments, the lone ticks and flashes,
the trance and daze, reverences and venerations.
Intimacy and imminence, elucidations and enlightenments,
elations and ecstasies, the feelings, touches and poses,
the manners, modes, and approaches,
the eminence to override, overwhelm, and engulf.
It is you, the purpose and drive, devotions and dedications,
the calmer and soother, to cease, obliterations and eradications,
mediator and serener, to terminate, extinctions and suppressions,
to enrich and augment, motivations and volitions.
It is you, the soul and the gospel, the heart and the essence,
the will and the sole, the subject, to merge and sustain,
relics and remainders, the remnants and fragments,
the entities and objects, to protract and extend.
It is you, the feelings, moods, and stances,
Intuitions, compassions, and concerns.
It is you, the Oceans’ waves, the drafts and breezes,
which are the entireties, to rejoice and always maintain,
protractions and extensions, continuations and sequels,
to portray and reveal, and to depict and expose.
It is you, the birds fly to reach, the fowls open the wings,
and me, to join hands, share shoulders, and stare and glare.
It is you and me, to pursue the rush, to crack the maze,
and to hint, trail, and track, the land of bliss and rapture,
while, the abandoned fawns and calves,
the broken wing sparrows and canaries, could shelter and heal.
Themes & Interpretations
Imminence as Poetic Mode
The poem does not describe the beloved as arrived but as perpetually arriving — the gasping and inhaling of Stanza 2 are the bodily registers of imminence. To inhabit imminence is to remain in the most alive state of relation: fully oriented toward what is coming, not yet settled into what has arrived and can be taken for granted. The chapter title “The Imminence” names not merely the poem’s subject but its entire ontological mode.
The Liturgical “It Is You” Anaphora
The repeated “It is you” beginning in Stanza 5 is structurally analogous to the mystical sifat (attribute) in Islamic theology: each iteration does not introduce a new entity but discloses a new dimension of the same inexhaustible presence. The anaphora is not enumeration but progressive unveiling — never finishing what it reveals, never exhausting the beloved it approaches.
The Relational Coda: From “You” to “You and Me”
The shift from apostrophic “you” to relational “you and me” in Stanza 10 is the poem’s most significant structural innovation. Rather than dissolving the self into the beloved (the conventional mystical endpoint of lyric apostrophe), the poem constitutes a dyad — a loving partnership that acts in the world. Love’s fulfillment is not mystical union but ethical consequence.
The Wounded Small Creatures as Moral Measure
The final image — abandoned fawns and calves, broken-wing sparrows and canaries — grounds the poem’s spiritual aspiration in the most vulnerable and overlooked lives. These creatures are the concrete test of whether the love the poem describes is real. Love’s validity is measured by what it shelters, not by what it feels. The measure of love’s reality is the healing it enables.
Pneumatic Epistemology
“Breathing ether,” “gasping melody,” “inhaling breeze” — the poem’s respiratory vocabulary constitutes a theory of knowledge as inhalation. Enlightenment, clarification, and elucidation are not achieved through argument or observation but through breathing in: wisdom is received as a life-giving breath rather than constructed through reason. This is a pneumatic epistemology — knowledge as the reception of the spirit (pneuma) through the body’s primary act of life.
Beloved as Guardian of Fragments
The beloved in Stanza 6 sustains “relics and remainders, the remnants and fragments” — not the grand and intact but the partial and broken. This is a theology of fragments that inverts the usual hierarchy of wholeness: the sacred resides in what has survived its own breaking, and love’s highest function is to extend and protract what the world has tried to extinguish. The fragment is not a lesser version of the whole; it is the whole in its most tested form.

